The deluge of voices in this sea of people,
Drowning the valiant cries of my struggle.
Where am I headed towards, I knew if only,
In the company of millions, yet so lonely.
The road has no name, it leads to every place,
I wonder if it will take me to the one, to whom I am not just a face.
I walk with countless bodies, but no one holds my hand,
No one makes me smile, no one to steer me to the bank.
I rummage for warmth, strain my ears to hear a symphony,
But all I am met with is the cold stares, amidst the cacophony.
I scan every vacant eye, search those faces of stone,
In the hope of a gleam, which will thrill me to the bone.
My heart says that he too waits for me, enduring the same pain,
Walking behind me, or crouched in the nook of some lane.
The universe will conspire for our paths to cross and eyes to meet,
After all good things come not to those who wait, but to those that seek.
9 comments:
awwwwwwww hun.......its awesome one but very depressing one....next tym i wanna see u writing happy poems instead of sad ones.....next tym it has to be cheerful ok?
i liked it..fresh, flowing, nicely cold, but hopeful in the end, very nice...crouching in the nook was a very nice touch, and that last line was terrific!
very well written biths...love u my poetess...
good job dear..
i liked it... u know i never thought u believed in fate and such..
but for a creative work its good and i think captures the loneliness of people living away from family n friends...
somehow both depressing and optimistic...nice :) :)
OMG bithika......how did u hide this talent in all those days at college...??
keep up d good work huni....
thanks a lot everyone :)
@kosha....will try to make it happy the next time :)
its an amazing expression of ones feelings.very well written.the flow of the poem,the words used just blends so well.one thing i can surely tell is that somebody is waiting for true love.hope u find him very soon.all the best
yur poem touches a different chord, it took me on a virtual plane, where i seldom go...
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